Angel Edits - Blog

I didn't get into this one. Wrath appears weak. The book never establishes his strength before making him all soft and cuddly. The blindness was a turn off and confusing. There are a total of maybe 3 sex scenes, all very short and implicit. His description reminds me of terminator and the village people. Not sexy.

There's a load of stuff about Mr.X I just skipped.


The changing POV is distracting. lots of typos. the character names are not creative. After her transformation, there is almost no description of how she is different. The plot progresses lightning fast, with no time for characters to absorb or react to the events. Not sure what everybody likes about this?