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the first one is definitely better, not sure why everyone liked the second one so much?I didn't like the separation, not having sex for 5 months in a tenuous relationship, she cheated the moment she brought Denny to Pete's again.
I was lonely reading it and her "character development" seemed super quick and non-believe-able.
