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Honor Thy Teacher

Honor Thy Teacher - Teresa Mummert not sure exactly what other people are liking in this book so much? There are moments, that almost feel, like Twilight, crazy, but the typos and jerky text are too painful to follow. There are many exact quotes from Twilight and the movies, it feels like a poorly written fan fic.

Scenes end just as abrubtly as they begin. He chases her around a lot. Says no then yes, then no, then yes. Then he loves her, but he loved his ex, but she was a druggie and he never really loved her. but he's a murderer... Then....

I just gave up. I'm sorry if I offend, but i paid for this book and I was a little offended that someone expected me to feel like it was a legitimate book when it clearly is not.