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Mile High (Up In The Air #2)

Mile High (Up In The Air #2) - R.K. Lilley I lost interest at 40%. The horse typo and other really bad typos turned me off. Why should i read it if the author didn't bother to? I also found myself not understanding James anymore.

She says he can have her for the weekend, and he suddenly decides he needs to fuck her on a horse? She's been so injured and they've been apart for a month. He's supposed to be contrite.

Then when the horse switched from Devil to Demon and back again, i gave up.

I don't blame the book, I'm in a mood. I'm only wanting male male lately. Stupid women are buggin me and this one is all female POV.