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Sapphire Universe

Sapphire Universe - Devon Herrera It's good, it's got all the cool stuff, 4 stars for the first half.
i was interested to see Connor's secret to make him totally awesome, but there isn't one. He's just a hot nice funny romantic everyday guy. He's not FBI, no guns, no billions, no underground fighting.
He's an assistant to a rich guy, he rides buses, eats subway, wears sweats. It was all very nice and real, but just wanted it all to go up a notch.
I didnt feel each scene build toward the arc, forwarding the plot, giving hints to the reveal to create the tension. 10+ typos and a big pet peeve ending.
This is just a nice sweet love story with some great dialog, nice people.