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Odalisque - Annabel Joseph I liked this better than Caressas Knees. It's a lot like Femme Chattel, in the purchasing of a slave...

Loved the use of nipple chains, but a little too painful for me to enjoy. Didn't like the sharing without jealousy. Even Caleb was furious when she slept with someone else, this guy was like, offering her up, bragging about fucking someone else,... taking a bj from someone he dislikes. All Odd.

And the wife who suddenly got jealous and angry and left...just odd, it's an open marriage, ironic for her to be so hypocritical.

I liked the sign language component of this.