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Caught Running

Caught Running - 'Abigail Roux',  'Madeleine Urban' adorable, these guys jump in and just love it...could have been longer and deeper, the sex was good open honest trusting. smart, well written, but several threads not resolved...is jonathan gay? will they live together? will the school find out? how do they/the kids feel about the secret?

head jumping annoying...no typos.

Eta: my dad read this and liked it, thought it was sweet. We talked about how gay men communicate/gives signals they are gay. In this one, i think it was when he put his feet in the other guys lap. Straight guys do not do that.