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Fair Game

Fair Game - Josh Lanyon $0.99 on Amazon-->Fair Game (All's Fair Book 1)

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Pet peeve, starting the story in the middle. I would have loved to read the first encounter and sex. A prologue or a hundred more pages would be nice.

That said, Josh Lanyon sure does know how to cast a spell and I was enchanted with geeky, yet awesome Elliot and hot headed, but emotional Tucker. I was surprised who dun it, and I really need to stop peeking at the last pages and spoiling myself.

And mini war gaming has got to be the geekiest thing I've seen in a MC.