the second half of this book is infinitely better than the first. it has a sit com, check your brain at the door feel to it.
if you imagine jory as kelllan, its much more enjoyable. lol.
if you liked this one, or want something a bit more....um...cohesive and well, explicit, the you must read;
[bc:Cut & Run|5199022|Cut & Run (Cut & Run #1)|Abigail Roux|http://d.gr-assets.com/books/1327894486s/5199022.jpg|5266173] and [bc:The Hell You Say|669790|The Hell You Say (Adrien English Mystery, #3)|Josh Lanyon|http://d.gr-assets.com/books/1327948537s/669790.jpg|19427721]
both those series are really compelling.
jory had adhd, and were in his head, thus the scattered thoughts. it gets better as the story progresses.
adding to the confusion,the . names are exactly the same as [bc:Between Sinners and Saints|10835196|Between Sinners and Saints |Marie Sexton|http://d.gr-assets.com/books/1303765658s/10835196.jpg|17436754]
jory, levi, rachel, biblical named siblings.