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Shattered Glass

Shattered Glass - Dani Alexander the romance and dialog are great like all the reviews mention. very funny, endearing characters. loved austins self discovery and admissions. the scene on the jag was very hot.

it needs some tighter editing to create continuity and flow. character development was good, but parts of peters personality were lost along the way. threads were dropped.
the mothers involvement bothered me.

the typos are distracting. i dont understand the typos? do ebooks not have spell check or grammar check? a huge one in the epilogue "i brought it with with him" grammar check should catch that or a beta reader? someone. one said "jessed" for Jesse

i took away one star for poor editing.