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Reaper's Property

Reaper's Property  - Joanna Wylde I agree with the reviews, it is good, well written, horse is fascinating.

Couple pet peeves for me, i don't like sex clubs. Much of the book has a captive sub/dom theme similar to Cherise Sinclair books, which is all a bit too raunchy and not romantic enough for me.

Horse also went straight for clit and nipple, without any kissing or foreplay at all. He was ruthless and relentless on her poor clit. She loved it i guess, a bit rough for me.

I also thought Marie didnt ever appreciate Horse for what he was;
'Horse needed a serious attitude adjustment'

huh? Really? You gonna change Horse? Just worship him and thank your lucky stars he took your white trash ass out of that trailer and protected you.

I found marie TSTL and did not get why horse was putting everything on the line for her.

It's good, just a few picky things. Looking forward to the next installment.

Eta: New cover = much better