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Beyond Eden

Beyond Eden - Kele Moon This is really three love stories, in one convoluted mess. I felt the danny/paul story was the lead and most compelling.
I would have liked to see a more emotional and developed conclusion. And i think the prologue and first chapter should have been from a male pov as evie is almost a secondary character here.

The bondage stuff was all within my comfort zone, but i can see why people might not like the cheating/jealousy stuff. But hey, its a menage, expect some jealousy.

I found paul and dan compelling and deep and sweet and complicated. All my kinks were covered.

The Eden thing seemed inconsistent at times, was eden good or bad? Lol.

The cover is ughhh, just ignore it.

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