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Beautifully Revealed

Beautifully Revealed - Bethany Bazile Really good, similar to stark trilogy and blackstone affair. Really enjoyed liam. I never felt like he was treating her like 'his whore', like i felt with up in the air. All the sex is worshipful, respectful. Dialogue isnt awkward, it all flows nicely.

So glad the grammar problem was better (although not fixed) in the second book or i might have had an aneurysm.

Loved the epilogue, the tuxedo, the surprise, and also the music references throughout.

Ok people, worse is a comparison. 'The grammar in the first book was WORSE than the second.'
Worst means none worse. 'The editing errors of the first book are the WORST I've ever read'