This had a Jory is amazing twink, big daddy thing going on. I just felt it could have gone deeper. I don't understand why so many m/m books have to be about coming out, closets, la de dah. Let's just accept we are gay and have some other external conflict please?
For me, m/m without guns is sort of meh....i mean ex navy now a school teacher, not thrilling. Ex navy now a commando,now we're talkin.
i liked the domination and kink here, even if it seemed out of character for the whitewashed old guy.