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The Student Prince

The Student Prince - FayJay I loved this....until 75%… then it dropped off a cliff of sorts and it felt incongruous. The end needs more of arthurs perspective, more depth of their love, more time, and more sex.i just felt Arthur never explained his extreme hesitancy then extreme risk taking, he was suddenly erratic.
But anyway, letting that go, it was fabulous and funny and fantasy. I was completely unfamiliar with the subject matter here, but i loved it anyway. Really really good.