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Perfect Chemistry

Perfect Chemistry  - Simone Elkeles Alejandro; deadly, dangerous, hot and sexy Mexican.

I liked the beginning of this, had my hot mexican all picked out. Then it falls apart near the end. So choppy and inconsistent. I held on because I wanted to see my man naked, but the one sex scene is fade to black. Grrrrr.
And.....
Alternating.
Present tense.
First person POV.
Incredidbly annoying, but does add urgency and a private feeling.
Anyway, I give up on YA.