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Wanted

Wanted  - J. Kenner The sex was hot and the tension was high....until they did it.
I was into this until about 58%, then i dropped out and couldn't get back in. It became cheesy and trite and Evan's character was inconsistent. Is he dangerous or the boy next door? He constantly was sticking his finger in her.
Perhaps I have outgrown kinky bazillionaires? Is it possible?

The cover is way too dark and I can't see the image or text on my kindle carousel or GR shelf. Needs more contrast.
Two annoying, easily fixed typos.