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Two Boys Kissing

Two Boys Kissing - David Levithan Taking a break at 62%.

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Every time two boys kiss, it opens up the world a little bit more.

I know somewhere just above the clouds, you still got the best seat, in the house.

It's nice, the concept, that previous generations whove gone thru it are somehow connected and watching over our children. Beautiful.

The disembodied fathers can be condescending and maudlin, putting the weight of thousands of deaths on these young boys.

The actual two boys kissing storyline is good, really good. The statement they are making, the feelings that transpire, the tie ins with other characters.

patois,a non-standard language (not multiple patios)
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