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Mark of the Gladiator

Mark of the Gladiator - Heidi Belleau,  Violetta Vane This lacked the prose, excitement, and lust of [b:The Gladiator's Master|12354504|The Gladiator's Master |Fae Sutherland|https://d202m5krfqbpi5.cloudfront.net/books/1313784214s/12354504.jpg|17334225].
The love interest is presented as a villain, a spoiled brat.
I could not fathom accepting him for a warrior's lover. Sniveling snot. Lol.
Nothing in the prose caught my interest. There were odd uses of American slang, not historical in any way.
I didn't feel sympathetic to any of the main characters.
When he struck the woman's face, I was done.

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