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Crush - Lacey Weatherford ***Free!*** On Amazon-->Crush (Crush series Book 1)

The writing is overly simple.
They speak in formal, complete sentences, inconsistent with their age.
There's very little subtext.
The characters are one dimensional.
There's continuity problems and typos.

And... I loved it!

Once I'd figured out the spoiler, He's a cop. She's underage (17). ,
some random box in my brain checked, and I became uncharacteristically tolerant and forgiving of the writing infractions.

Who knows why?

Does it matter?

[bc:Smitten|17252101|Smitten (Crush, #2)|Lacey Weatherford|https://d.gr-assets.com/books/1358268506s/17252101.jpg|23842226] Smitten (Crush series Book 2)
[bc:Love|18811265|Love (Crush, #3)|Lacey Weatherford|https://d.gr-assets.com/books/1384701658s/18811265.jpg|26746231]LOVE (Crush series Book 3)
[bc:Smolder|21954274|Smolder (Crush, #4)|Lacey Weatherford|https://d.gr-assets.com/books/1398016166s/21954274.jpg|41261219]Smolder (Crush Book 4)