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Collide (Blackcreek Series)

Collide (Blackcreek Series) - Riley Hart "Food first. I’ll kiss and make it better later." Noah winked, trying not to smile at the cheesiness of his own line.

This book was a 'readers also liked' rec for [b:The Backup Boyfriend|19059695|The Backup Boyfriend (The Boyfriend Chronicles, #1)|River Jaymes|https://d202m5krfqbpi5.cloudfront.net/books/1385797196s/19059695.jpg|27085211], and sure enough, its a GFY/FTL with lots of the same flaws.
I liked BUB better.

intense angsty convos
Casual "manly" dialogue
Deep feeling of souls connected, both characters are committed to it
Nice jelousy, possesive stuff
Good back story and character development
Wes (might read the second book just for him)

The names Noah and Coop, esp when they are WRONG!
Too much "he was always like that" "I want to feel you in my mouth"
Cheezy pick up lines, inappropriate for lovers.
Lots of over analyzing, no subtlety
Repetitive references to the issues with their parents
Way too much sex, maybe 7-9 sex scenes, making it feel like a porno.

Unfortunately, I wouldn't rec this to a friend :(