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Strength of the Mate

Strength of the Mate - Kendall McKenna I need to quit this series.
The issues I had with the first book were magnified here ten fold.
The baby wipes, the chaos, the rules no one knows, the lack of any kind of social structure, sex in public, wherever.

The adverbs and simple sentence structure just killed it for me. I also couldn't follow who was talking, who was a woof, why they were pissed. Just totally lost.


Strength of the Mate (Tameness of the Wolf Book 3)